Very very pretty! You are fluid and also get some nice accents in there too. I've been dealing with the hand flippy issue too, that just takes time and gaining confidence with your movements and arm placement. Some great advice I got recently was about utilizing my entire space. Putting my arms out there like I mean it, looking out at the audience to really connect with them as well as being intentional about the moments where I bring the energy in to myself.

Kudos on your second solo performance! I look forward to seeing more :-)

your stage presence and movements are fantastic! you must have been studying very hard! I couldn't see the whole thing (stupid yt) but for your layback and drop, I noticed your shoulder blades were 'pointing'. I don't know if you need to lower your upper sternum more or set your elbows higher and farther from your body? Your drop was SO smooth and slinky! Loved it! Keep it up!

Jen! Lovely job! First things first I think it was awesome that you were dancing for an autism benefit! I also loved your music and your costume was to die for!
What I noticed was that you don't engage with the audience. There's a way to look at the audience and then there's a way to look at the audience and draw them in to what you're doing. Even if you're completely nervous think about keeping your eyes up and direct. I thought your movements were great but that your face didn't match your moves. I am also totally guilty of this, it's those silly nerves! For me watching ballet videos (especially pas de deuxs) are great ways to watch facial emotion. I can also see you anticipating some of your movements which is pretty common with most dancers. You just have to feel the music more, which might sound a bit ridiculous but is true.

I also wanted to say that you did a lovely job spotting your turns at the end. Overall I was think it was an awesome performance especially since it was only your second solo. And I didn't even notice your flippy hand. :)

I´ve already seen this and liked it but only now, after Rachel´s workshop about backbends, did I notice that you bend only in the lower back. You should bend the spine in its entire length, not just in one part. This could cause you back problems later. You should start by lifting your chest as high as you can and as you lower backwards, keep lifting your chest. Watch some Rachel´s laybacks.