This is a video of a number my troupemate and I did at a student hafla last week. I'm not looking for critique of technique particularly here, more feedback on the artistic interpretation (choreography, performance, mood, costuming, etc.). It was originally designed as a trio, then one member pulled out and it ended up as a duet. We're planning on turning it back into a trio, and polishing it up a bit, which is a why I'm asking for feedback as we think of what to change.

It's part choreography and some improv (my solo bit is improv); it was a whim of mine to do something to Edith Piaf's music, and we finished putting it together minutes before we performed. It's inspired by The Indigo's 'Serpent Rouge'.

Link: ca.youtube.com/watch

I added some 'old film effects' to the video to help set the mood we were going for.

Thanks!