My only issue is with the band. I don't know what they were thinking when they allowed the other girls up on to their stage when you were dancing. From what I saw you were beautiful!

From what I saw of you, I think you were doing quite well and I found myself wanting to see more of what you were doing instead of the gals with the fans. I suppose my only criticism is for the other girls - it would have looked better if they had coordinated or choreographed something so they didn't look like random waviness on stage. You looked awesome and moved well to the music. I especially liked how well you made all the fringe fly.

Well, I love your dancing and I think you did really well despite having curveballs thrown at you.

A few minor things:

1) Maybe it was the camera angle, but I'd like to see you elongate your neck and roll your shoulders down and back. Occasionally your shoulders looked like they were creeping up to the ears

2) During the fast parts, I would be aware of the arms. Minor again, but they tend to hit positions as opposed to traveling through positions. When you're smooth the arms seem to flow naturally through various levels and positions, but when it gets faster it doesn't seem to flow as nice.

3) I think too, try to get your arm undulations to travel thruogh the whole hand. Sometimes I saw some wrist floppage instead of the movement rolling out thruogh the fingertips.

Great musicality, and again, you were hitting accents in a way that made it look like you had been dancing to this song all your life. Nice job! Thanks for watching my vid!