Yay Jen for actually doing Tribal in your Tribal Fusion! :) I liked it when you modified certain ATS moves in your own personal way. You isolations were nice and your musicality was good. I think the biggest thing you need to work on is a stronger lift in the upper body and your arms. That low "W" posture with the arms I don't think was really working on you. But it could if you a) held your uppper body higher and stronger and b) always did it consciously. I feel like you should either be in 2nd position with your elbows lifted, consciously in that "neutral Mardi Love" (as some call it) position where your elbows are close in to your torso but not aimlessly floating inbetween. When you actually danced with your arms, they looked lovely. But then when you were moving with other parts of your body, they did distracting things. Try to move them slowly, consciously and put them in places that will frame the other movements of your body well. And keep your torso lifted! :)
Also, I thought you handled the tip thing well. I personally don't like tips on the body and will encourage people to tip into a basket instead. Or if theres no basket, I'll take them in my hand and stuff them into my costume myself or just hold them in my hand until i'm done. But thats just personal preference.
Otherwise, really well done! :)

That was once of the nicer Tribal Fusion pieces I have seen recently. You improve well. I also like seeing more tribal that fusion in this kind of a dance. I wouldn't have been comfortable with the tipping either but you seemed to handle it well. Sorry I can't give you some nice tips like the one before me all I can say is keep it up.

First solo?! Wowee woman, you kick ass.

are you kidding? that was smokin hawt!!! There were a LOT of amazing moves and moods in your perf. I think maybe the light was a little dim and right from above you instead of aimed at you. It would have high-lighted your upper-torso, which I also wanted to see more slinky-ness in. Yeah, tips are hard, our teacher says Point to the side of the belt with your finger. Look down for a second if you have to. And if they reach for something else, step back and repeat. In the meantime (and I'm guilty of this too) keep some of your body still 'in the mood', like adopt a frame with your arms, say, in front of your body with the tip-hip tipped out. I loved the shimmy you did while waiting. Definitely gonna add that to mine. But really, it was very, very good. I loved the way you teased and wound around your floor area. It said This is mine! good for you!