hey Mariah,

I thought this was great. A bit hard to see, but it looked like you were having a lot of fun with it! I found your movements to be small and precise and fitting very well with each phrase. I like that you kept it really flirty with the hair tosses and shoulder shimmies; the audience seemed to really be with you, which always makes it so much easier :)

My only suggestion is this...since it's a fairly long drum solo, when it hits that slow bit in the middle I would say to reeeeaaaallly slow it down there and play with that melody so that when it starts speeding up again it really has an impact. I also wouldn't have minded maybe a few big hip circles or something to take you out of the shimmy stuff, maybe some more undulations sans shimmy.

Otherwise I thought it was really fun to watch! I wish I could have seen your costume better; it looked lovely from what I could see. Thanks for posting!