thank you reverend mike for this tribe

topic posted Mon, November 21, 2005 - 11:25 PM by  Jesse
as soon as i entered the hut
my winegourd fell open
and my heart was a woman

she closed her eyes when mine opened
her love was my anger
and nothing more was required

beautiful to let go of
what's so hard in the vision
yet so soft in the knowing
posted by:
Jesse
California
  • Re: thank you reverend mike for this tribe

    Tue, November 22, 2005 - 5:10 PM
    This was the limitation to haiku. You couldn't have a POEM. a continuous Haiku-kal thought in multi stanzas...

    You guys are awesome!

    This is powerful, a LOT of meaning here. Don't know what it means to Jesse, but it is a river of conflicted emotion to me.

    Jesse drown in the river and then woke up on the other side..

    Rev Mike

Recent topics in "Open Verse Haiku"

Topic Author Replies Last Post
Mirror Eques 0 January 19, 2007
Night-walk Eques 2 January 19, 2007
Observe your thoughts Unsubscribed 0 January 19, 2007
Alayha Pirate King 0 June 16, 2006