Haikuishly bless you

topic posted Mon, November 21, 2005 - 8:35 PM by 
sweetest satori the name
presence in spirit the same
love gratefully became


ok now just some more zilliness off the cuffz

feel like poetizing shorts
can come up with all sorts
ryhmes becoming cohorts
whatever muses you forths
laughing until we all snorts

wo who
working like hihu
a few lines can do
really all words will coo
meanings may come too
stopping smelling zoodoo.

for those not from Seattle zoodoo is compost. get it zoo doo.

love of the bird who flew
let go of the pain it's not glue
death of the ego he knew
in love and it's light all grew
reborn beautifully a new

Share doo like this and some heart too at

tribe.net/visionsorintentionstowardoneness
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  • Re: Haikuishly bless you

    Mon, November 21, 2005 - 8:44 PM
    excellent haikew... we mustnt pretend that form dictate our beauty. The beauty is the spirit essence within. Sartori, the Haiku must allow...

    Rev
    • Re: Haikuish bless you

      Tue, November 22, 2005 - 5:30 PM
      Thank you for your welcoming Rev. MIke. Please feel welcome posting your work on Oneness co creation tribe too. Started a Haiku tread inspired with your openness.

      Guess haiku had rules,
      Writing free form fools,
      Hearts the only tools.
      • Grateful in all ways. Lead into "Love Rains"

        Wed, November 23, 2005 - 1:24 PM
        This is my best effort at expressing the love and gratitude felt for all.

        Thank you all for being and shining love always,
        Openness empowers this journey in new ways,
        Growth and lessons found exploring all ways,
        Openly expressed paths brighten the ways.
        Others walking beside or leading a way,
        Love flows gratefully this day and always.

        Love all;Freewil

        ps;Wrote the following to an earth angel Laura Love that shared tears over this expression. She moderates a heart felt circle. link below all are welcome
        imtakiniton.tribe.net/
        Wrote a poem for her before Earth Angel. It's in the first poetry tread on the link below. All are welcome.
        tribe.net/visionsorintentionstowardoneness

        Love Rains

        To touch a heart so sweet,
        Gives meaning to the meek,
        Kissing tears from your cheek.

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