12_9_05

topic posted Fri, December 9, 2005 - 6:25 AM by  Unsubscribed
I'm always in love
don't keep track of the names, Mom --
or you'll be confused
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  • Re: 12_9_05

    Fri, December 9, 2005 - 10:41 PM
    awesome...

    excellent twist... funny, traditional haiku evokes a thought of vast timeliness to me. timeless, vast, apparent across the ages.

    Sometimes, you need something that is simple, timely and yet profound to the age that it belongs to. I love the playfulness of this. And I think everyone "gets" it. love it...

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