you came to visit

topic posted Fri, March 28, 2008 - 6:59 AM by  judih
i was lying on a Friday futon
under the sweet fan of ceiling swirl
and i remembered how you came to visit
on such days as these
how you'd smile your way into my fantasies
jokes and innuendo paving the way
that way of yours
that link of ours
the sweet dissolve of distance
till distance did dissolve us
those years grew wings
as today you came to visit
and how sweet the coming was
posted by:
judih
Israel
  • Re: you came to visit

    Tue, April 1, 2008 - 10:24 PM
    lying on a red couch
    this side of yesterday
    experiencing you
    remembering
    a visit --
    so exquisite.

    remembering ours.

    sideWALKS
    long talks
    impromptu garden parties.
    short days
    long gaze -- to help us to remember.


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