rainy day woman reprise

topic posted Wed, April 29, 2009 - 5:38 PM by  WIREMAN
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the news was bad
she didn't want to
talk about it right then
across the street
lovely young ladies
@ the bar
disintergrating as we
go along....all of us
spice of life
keeps ya on yer toes
right now
the next moment
all we have
don't wait for nothin'!
i love her and i ache
for her....for me....for us all
posted by:
WIREMAN
Maryland
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  • Re: rainy day woman reprise

    Fri, May 1, 2009 - 8:57 PM
    come in she said
    I’ll give you shelter from the storm
    She was my rainy day woman
    And we were entangled up in blue
    I was easy come and easy go
    And she felt just like a natural woman
    But then I tried to own her
    And she need not want or need another husband
    So she let me go
    And I tried to hang on
    Now I know better
    Love is a butterfly
    And I lost interest in collecting
    Got to be free




    Love gives us only the now
    for her for me for you for us all
    if we fill every moment with love
    the time will see that it is done
    • Re: rainy day woman reprise

      Fri, May 1, 2009 - 10:25 PM
      free to build a deconstruction
      invite the scorned, flaming combustion
      tear down facade, remove induction
      free thought, free the function
      rolling stone gathers no compunction
      can't get there from here, there ain't no junction
      • Re: rainy day woman reprise

        Sat, May 2, 2009 - 3:13 AM
        there is no there
        there
        I never knew women at all
        and that is the truth

        but I always thought
        she should have ate a peach
        and let that resentment go
        • Re: rainy day woman reprise

          Sat, May 2, 2009 - 6:51 AM
          o I need everything that ever
          was is will be when it comes to love
          coyotes howling
          hawks screaming
          hammer down
          and earthquake prophecies be dammed
          bridge out! bridges burned
          jaws closing 'til the teeth click together
          loincloths flapping in the breeze
          • Re: rainy day woman reprise

            Sat, May 2, 2009 - 11:57 AM
            when the towel comes off
            crows start to yack,
            enthusiastic caws
            crowds go wild
            go, go, go
            rounds of applause
            aphrodisiac dizzy delerium
            all good, charlie parker groove
            breeze cries names of dionysus
            power from the strangest places
            drumming up the extra heat
            help's on the way
            • Re: rainy day woman reprise

              Sun, May 3, 2009 - 6:47 AM
              uncontrollable's
              like snakes on
              everything
              an oprah story
              for sure
              full of doc's and
              assistant's and
              pain
              caught in the game
              endlessly spinning
              cycle till all becomes memory
              my babe.....www.behance.net/Gallery/Ca...Jean/137421
              • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                Sun, May 3, 2009 - 7:24 AM
                "Oh rainy day woman
                I've never seem to see you for the good times or the sunshine
                You have been a friend of mine,rainy day woman"

                thank you for the pictures of Carole Jean.
                • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                  Sun, May 3, 2009 - 10:31 AM
                  cycle till all becomes memory
                  cranking out blacks&whites
                  in shades of rainy days
                  water under the bridge
                  bridge over troubled mindwaves
                  from love to love
                  from pain to pain
                  rainy day to rainy rainy nights
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                    Re: rainy day woman reprise

                    Sun, May 3, 2009 - 1:18 PM
                    intense
                    insane
                    insatiable
                    expectations
                    i don't place 'em
                    sometimes you just
                    don't have to give
                    a damn. they stop flow........anywaze.....let's jam!!!!!!
                    • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                      Sun, May 3, 2009 - 4:14 PM
                      woman blues
                      freakin’ heartbreak
                      with its hurtin’
                      gotta move on
                      do somethin’ else
                      other than grievin’
                      maybe some writin’
                      cryin’ through song
                      howlin’ with the dogs
                      under the full moon
                      moanin’ out the pain
                      • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                        Sun, May 3, 2009 - 7:35 PM
                        moanin and leavin it behind
                        feeling the weight slip away
                        slow departure
                        but slipping away
                        • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                          Wed, May 6, 2009 - 5:47 AM
                          no leave the moanin' behind
                          I want moanin' all the time
                          nothin' like a join to sweeten the clinch
                          break me mama and trash my heart
                          go ahead & take the itch
                          right outta my teeth
                          • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                            Wed, May 6, 2009 - 1:42 PM
                            these things
                            are golden
                            for a writer's
                            bliss, material
                            the hood
                            the street on a
                            sunday morn
                            the energy of
                            youth
                            pushing it to
                            the limit
                            especially the
                            music jam
                            on wings of desire
                            watching her
                            on the trapeze
                            the angel fell
                            to home
                            • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                              Wed, May 6, 2009 - 6:53 PM
                              she is so beautiful
                              these things are golden for a writers bliss
                              "to be a good man to one woman one time
                              and that''ll be the end of the road babe"

                              I never paid my dues mark
                              I got what I had coming
                              must have been my karma
                              the karma blues

                              on the wings of desire
                              I will fly away
                              a home sick angel
                              every thing is perfect










                              • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                                Wed, May 6, 2009 - 7:26 PM
                                homesick angels
                                playing those golden horns
                                eric dolphy, booker little
                                sax and trumpet serenade
                                rainy day anguish
                                as honey hail
                                feel life while you got it
                                it's gotta be the best bliss
                                gotta get it while ya can
                                • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                                  Fri, May 8, 2009 - 7:05 AM
                                  I swear that engineer on the that west bound freight train in some old blues man playing that locomotive horn
                                  it comes so fast it lingers for a while and then the melody fades
                                  and I can't get hear it again till the next train comes balling down the tracks.

                                  gotta get it while ya can
                                  got listen to the music when
                                  you got them metaphysical homelessness blues
                                  • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                                    Fri, May 8, 2009 - 7:36 AM
                                    that sweet chariot is riding the freight
                                    a mess of angels pulling the steamy horn
                                    rock operas have been made for this
                                    whole swooping caravans have ridden through this
                                    a small room of poets have written of this
                                    and this is what we get
                                    • Re: rainy day woman reprise

                                      Fri, May 8, 2009 - 10:32 AM
                                      and all we got is just another verse
                                      the uni verse within a universe
                                      a Matryoshka doll

                                      I want to be in that room
                                      where poetry swoops through
                                      because
                                      This is
                                      It.




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