Aftertaste

topic posted Sat, October 17, 2009 - 8:00 AM by 
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Hopefully later
Me being me
My unique blend
Added flavor
To the mix
My character
As a self
The I
In individual
Was deemed
Discernible
From the rest
Even if
Remembered
As some odd
Aftertaste
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  • Re: Aftertaste

    Sat, October 17, 2009 - 12:27 PM
    like sour cream dip
    they sat on the beige leather couches
    the latecomer
    forced to stand
    wearing dark corduroy
    drinking tea from a chipped mug
    the others sipped cocktails

    no, nothing wrong with this picture
    language aside, mind aside
    sour cream dip and a pickle
    • Re: Aftertaste

      Sat, October 17, 2009 - 1:36 PM
      I stand tall as a thorn
      among them roses
      like the flaw in a gem
      maybe not perfect
      and yet something
      valuable to someone
      who sees my worth
      worthy of notice
      as if important
      during the scheme
      of everything else
      so I dream
      so I hope
      within my oddity

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