An elusive goal...

topic posted Fri, April 20, 2007 - 1:06 PM by  Eric
... to write poetry that reads like a brickwall... cold, hard and unforgiving... something to smash one's head into.
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Eric
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    Re: An elusive goal...

    Fri, April 20, 2007 - 4:25 PM
    we can do it, and we will!
    You just need the guts and the creativity. Bring it on!
    • Re: An elusive goal...

      Fri, April 20, 2007 - 7:56 PM
      Not with a Bang

      Stillness.
      Light calmly shines
      through bare-branch silhouettes.
      Ice, frozen in time
      sparkles, giving no reasons.
      Still. Cold.
      Natural cycles
      Out on the battlefield of man
      brutal bleeding
      shattering of bones and dreams
      too loud and crazed
      to be heard
      reverberating in shattered brains.
      Once a molten planet
      shot out of star stuff
      creating plains and seas,
      rocky terrain
      spinning so merrily
      with no idea of sadness
      set into motion
      spiraling cycles.
      In crystal stillness
      frozen tears break and fall
      slowly, silently, into time
      knowing not what we have wrought.

      (c) February 17, 2007 Laurie Corzett/libramoon

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