Residue

topic posted Sat, May 17, 2008 - 4:56 AM by  Eric Ashford





Some late falling leaves
are too dark to be visible.

They crash through the night
as you lay deafened by frost
or the creaking doors of the sky.

Train wrecks happen
when no one is watching.
People fall out of planes
into empty fields.
Life collides with its own loneliness
is nullified
into countless zeros.

You can fall
into a dead space unnoticed.
Where you would expect to find debris
dark leaves tumble unseen.

In the morning
you sweep up your remains
closing a door softly behind you.














(C) Eric Ashford May 08





posted by:
Eric Ashford
Dayton
  • Re: Residue

    Sat, May 17, 2008 - 5:49 AM
    (You can fall
    into a dead space unnoticed.
    Where you would expect to find debris
    dark leaves tumble unseen.)

    man I like your poetry! Yea, I feel in there before and my first thought was to keep it as tidy there as possible - it was only my second thought to climb out
    • Re: Residue

      Sat, May 17, 2008 - 11:52 AM
      Much obliged D

      the poem is pretty much all subjective
      but I think the images are universal.

      Thanks for the feedback

      e

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