Coming Up.

topic posted Sun, January 4, 2009 - 10:24 PM by  ~Renevatio~
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Wings folded
Eyes flooded
Dawn gilded
Birth budded
Full winded
Gold studded
Sure footed
Bold Blooded...


Breath baited
Lion hearted
Full sated
Path charted
Son shaded
Com-parted
E-lated
Re-guarded...


Once bloated
Once blighted
Oft stilted
Near sighted
Un-sheltered
Un-lighted
Thin coated
Ig-knighted


Sky charted
Lee-winded
Red carded
De-friended
We parted
We mended
Life started...

Class ended.
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  • Re: Coming Up.

    Mon, January 5, 2009 - 1:59 PM
    Graduation

    And so it came to pass
    Times were grim, grimey,
    evil happily at play
    We told ourselves
    thus has it ever been
    cancerous slime feeding
    on starving misery,
    beating, drawing the blood
    from our calluses
    with rusty spiked sticks
    "Dance for us
    Such beautiful rigor
    Learn to please like poppety
    puppets
    we shelve or play with
    willfully, we the special
    chosen wunderkind of wealth"
    Dancing, jerky minstrel clowns
    dressed to allure Poppa's friends
    taught by whip to angle
    through our paces
    until contorted organs
    breathe no more
    The rituals of sacrifice
    bring no balm, no water
    Manna, gathered by shackled slaves
    packaged and sold
    to the highest bidder
    Empty child must suckle
    on hypnotic commands
    But it came to pass --
    not to become eternity
    Lessons to be learned, surpassed
    as, class by class
    we commence
    beyond class

    (c) April 27, 2008 Laurie Corzett/libramoon
    • Re: Coming Up.

      Fri, October 30, 2009 - 10:36 PM
      New
      will not sacrifice love
      to a late November rain
      with spindly legs and alligator shoes.
      an angel fluttered near
      in blood stained armchair
      broken heart unearthed a tear.

      gave love in silence
      all colorful and cheer
      with seeds of melancholy.
      nestled in vacuum
      moist with honeydew veneer
      bittersweet reflections bright and clear.

      brought love of justice
      with passing clouds and shouts
      a requiem blames no one.
      cooler heads prevail
      and cleanse pretense so dear
      line drawn then cleaved.

      sang rebellious love
      cutting dead wood from strength
      a model citizen aloof borrows nothing.
      patient thought simply hummed
      with time dividing curried favor
      at rest in bamboo garden green.

      made accidental love
      leading from there to here
      in between populated stars.
      earth water fire and air
      felt free enough and brave
      to leave us aware.

      what is there, after everything is taken apart, then put back together,
      only it is put back differently, what once was, is always lost, it's just that
      the new so resembles the old we act like old friends and pretend we know each other,
      all the way to the end.

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